My own Narrative

My Narrative

Once upon a time in a haunted Island named Cheeky Face, there were two Soldiers named B.Carmine and A.Carmine. They works for the Cogs. They were both brothers and they were searching the Island to check if it was haunted. When they were in  the middle of the Island they saw monsters that were called Locusts that came from the underground. The Locust spotted them and started to shoot at them, when B. Carmine heard them firing. He shouted out to A.Carmine “Take cover, take cover!” They started to fire towards them.

Soon they found out that they were no match for them, so they called Marcus, Baird, Cole and Dom and that was their squad. They got dropped off at the edge of the Island of Cheeky Face and was forced to go on foot because of the battle that B. Carmine and A. Carmine is having. When Marcus and the squad were walking they saw these little creatures named wretches. They were well known for eating humans. Marcus and the squad fought the wretches by hitting them with their gun. The wretches died. When Marcus and the squad reached B. Carmine and A. Carmine they all fired at the locust back into the locust hole. They defeated them but there was just one problem. There were about one million of the locusts underground.

When B. Carmine and A. Carmine met Marcus and the squad, they went underground where all the locusts lived. They saw locusts all over the place. They had to keep quiet and to take cover just incase the locusts saw them. Their mission was to go to the middle where all the locusts lived. They had to put an explosive in there to kill all the locusts, wretches, ravens and the boomers. They had to kill all the locusts that got in their way. They were 120 kilometres away from the middle. They saw a tank near them so they ran to it but it didn’t work. Marcus called Baird because he was an expert at this. Baird said “It will take about two minutes, cover me.”

The locusts heard the noise and ran like the wind to Baird and started firing at Baird. The bullets were like fireballs shooting from a volcano. B. Carmine saw them. He started firing at the locusts and then everybody started firing at the locusts but, there were too many locusts to handle. Then Marcus said “ Baird, hurry up!”. Then a few seconds he finished and cried out “Everybody in, it’s all ready!”. They hurried and ran over them like nothing was underneath. After a few metres they saw a nasty locust that was big and humongous. Marcus the leader and the squad were in the tank. They were like little ants to this locust that was called brusukors. A few seconds............. BANG! BOOM! Cole shot the brusukors like it was a big shooting target. Then the brusukors fell down and made a huge hole. Baird drove the tank around the hole and went along. Finally we’re in the middle, “Woooooh! It stinks in here, it smells like your socks!” growled Cole to Baird. They were arguing. Then BANG! One of the locust named Sniper shot at the tank and then it exploded like a volcano.

Then Dom quickly plotted the bomb that could kill the locusts on a rock and shouted  “Everybody look at the hole!”. So they ran to the hole and quickly jumped out. BOOM! It killed all the locusts underneath the ground. B. Carmine was crying because his brother died where all the locusts got killed.

Two Years Later............

After the soldiers checked the Island it was officially secured. They started building new motels, and hotels. They turned them into a place where happy families could go on holiday. When Marcus and the squad returned their captain named Hoffman gave them each a medal for bravery and honour.

THE END