My Comment on Room 4 ~ Sprint Finals

My Bio Poem

My Bio Poem

Tevita

Is ~ Intelligent, Talented, Respectful, Energetic.

Son of ~ Nepote and Vika

Brother of ~ Rose, Soni, Robert, Petelo, Ana, Keilesi, Ansely and Tevita.

Lover of ~ Family, Sports, Art, Science and Computers.

Who feels ~ Exhausted after a Rugby League game, Excited when a race is on, Disappointed and sad when a family member dies.

Who gives ~ Time to make the lunch, kindness to other people and love to my family.

Who fears ~ Heights, Dogs and a murderer on the loose.

What would like to see ~ The Tongan Rugby Team, Grandpa and the Brisbane Broncos Rugby league team.

Who lives ~ Panmure, Auckland, New Zealand.

Mapa

My Presentation on Waitangi Day

My Own Narrative on the Broken Car

The Broken Car

One hot day, there was a family on a holiday. The mother’s name was Taylor and the father’s name was Scott. They both had wonderful children. Their names were Lilo and Bling. They had a pet dog named Stitch, he was a big dog. Stitch was a K-9 dog. Lilo was the smart one and Bling, well he was the strong one and the oldest one in the family. Bling was seventeen years old and Lilo was only fifteen years old.

Once they started to pack up for the picnic Scott said
” Go to the toilet before you get in the car. “ They went down the driveway and headed off to Tepu Bay. When they were halfway there, their car started to break down. Lilo said
” Dad why did we stop? “ Dad replied” That’s because of the car breaking down Lilo. “ Scott took off his seatbelt and went outside and checked the engine. He grabbed his cell phone to call one of his friends and his cell phone said” No signal. “ Taylor said
” Scott, is the engine ready to go? “ ” No, it is not ready to go! “ Scott said desperately.

Scott told Bling to help him push the car while Taylor steered the wheel to get off the road. Suddenly a truck pulled up and the fat driver got out. Scott asked if he could help tow the car back home. The driver said in a deep voice” Yeah, sure I can help. “ So the fat man got a rope that had a hook at the end and hooked it on the front of the car. They all went back home, but they still had their picnic in the backyard. Taylor said in a thankful way to the driver,
” Would you like to stay for the picnic? “
” Sure, I would like to stay, thank you “ said the fat man thoughtfully. They all had a lovely day in the back yard outside.

THE END

My Poppleton Friedrich Vordemberge-Gildewart

Hi this is my popplet on a famous artist. His name is Friedrich Vordemberge-Gildewart. I found ten facts about him.

Math Whizz

My Wallwisher on Waitangi Day

My Art Reflection

 Art: Reflecting on my Abstract Painting

1. Are you pleased with your abstract painting? why / why not?

Yes I am pleased with my art because of the colours I have chosen and mixed.

2. What did you find easy when you created your abstract painting?

I found erasing the grid was easy.

3. What part did you find tricky when you were creating your abstract painting? -think about painting, ruling it up etc.

I found painting in between the lines tricky.

4. Who / What helped you when you were painting?

Miss Paton and Tyler helped me while I was painting.

5. What would you do differently next time? Think about: colours, painting, ruling of grid, etc.

The thing that I will do differently is painting in between the lines.


6. What frustrated you when you created your abstract painting?

The thing that frustrated me was when there was a purple blob on the green.

My Poster on Holi

Hi this is Tyler and I poster on Holi. What is Holi you asked. It is a festival of coloured powder and representing the good overcoming evil. It was celebrated on the 8th of March 2012 this year.

My wordle on Dis words

My own Narrative

My Narrative

Once upon a time in a haunted Island named Cheeky Face, there were two Soldiers named B.Carmine and A.Carmine. They works for the Cogs. They were both brothers and they were searching the Island to check if it was haunted. When they were in  the middle of the Island they saw monsters that were called Locusts that came from the underground. The Locust spotted them and started to shoot at them, when B. Carmine heard them firing. He shouted out to A.Carmine “Take cover, take cover!” They started to fire towards them.

Soon they found out that they were no match for them, so they called Marcus, Baird, Cole and Dom and that was their squad. They got dropped off at the edge of the Island of Cheeky Face and was forced to go on foot because of the battle that B. Carmine and A. Carmine is having. When Marcus and the squad were walking they saw these little creatures named wretches. They were well known for eating humans. Marcus and the squad fought the wretches by hitting them with their gun. The wretches died. When Marcus and the squad reached B. Carmine and A. Carmine they all fired at the locust back into the locust hole. They defeated them but there was just one problem. There were about one million of the locusts underground.

When B. Carmine and A. Carmine met Marcus and the squad, they went underground where all the locusts lived. They saw locusts all over the place. They had to keep quiet and to take cover just incase the locusts saw them. Their mission was to go to the middle where all the locusts lived. They had to put an explosive in there to kill all the locusts, wretches, ravens and the boomers. They had to kill all the locusts that got in their way. They were 120 kilometres away from the middle. They saw a tank near them so they ran to it but it didn’t work. Marcus called Baird because he was an expert at this. Baird said “It will take about two minutes, cover me.”

The locusts heard the noise and ran like the wind to Baird and started firing at Baird. The bullets were like fireballs shooting from a volcano. B. Carmine saw them. He started firing at the locusts and then everybody started firing at the locusts but, there were too many locusts to handle. Then Marcus said “ Baird, hurry up!”. Then a few seconds he finished and cried out “Everybody in, it’s all ready!”. They hurried and ran over them like nothing was underneath. After a few metres they saw a nasty locust that was big and humongous. Marcus the leader and the squad were in the tank. They were like little ants to this locust that was called brusukors. A few seconds............. BANG! BOOM! Cole shot the brusukors like it was a big shooting target. Then the brusukors fell down and made a huge hole. Baird drove the tank around the hole and went along. Finally we’re in the middle, “Woooooh! It stinks in here, it smells like your socks!” growled Cole to Baird. They were arguing. Then BANG! One of the locust named Sniper shot at the tank and then it exploded like a volcano.

Then Dom quickly plotted the bomb that could kill the locusts on a rock and shouted  “Everybody look at the hole!”. So they ran to the hole and quickly jumped out. BOOM! It killed all the locusts underneath the ground. B. Carmine was crying because his brother died where all the locusts got killed.

Two Years Later............

After the soldiers checked the Island it was officially secured. They started building new motels, and hotels. They turned them into a place where happy families could go on holiday. When Marcus and the squad returned their captain named Hoffman gave them each a medal for bravery and honour.

THE END

My Presentation on Holi

Topic Presentation: Rubric

Hi, Teagan judged me on my presentation. I got a three on loud clear voice, that means I have to speak a bit louder and I also got a three on eye contact and also means that I need to give more eye contact. I was great at memorising my own information and was great at putting on my references on my presentation.

My Peer Assessment on Tyler

Hi this is my peer assessment on Tyler. I think Tyler's strength is writing in full sentences and great at writing in paragraphs. He need to edit his work and to he has to work on his resolution and his problem.

My Self Assesment on my own Narrative

Hi this is my self assessment. My strength is that I can vary sentences beginning. I need to work on complex sentences and sequence my idea clearly.

My Retelling Narrative on The Three Little Pigs

The Three Little Pigs

Once upon a time there were three little pigs. The pigs mother said ”You are too old to be living with me, go and find a new home to live in.“ So they went off looking for a new home to live in. The first little pig built his house out straws, the second little pig built his house out of sticks, and the third little pig built his house out of bricks, and of course bricks take a lot of time to build.

The scary evil wolf jumped out and saw the first little pig house. The scary evil wolf sneaked over there and said ”Little pig little pig let me in.“ ”No no no!“ Said the little pig.”Then I’ll huff and I’ll puff and I’ll blow your house in.“ So he did, while the scary evil wolf blowing his house in. The first little pig went to the second little pig house.

The evil wolf found out that the first little pig escaped from him. The evil wolf found another house that was made out of sticks and it was the second little pig. The evil wolf looked into the window and saw the first little pig inside with the other pig. Then the evil wolf said”Little pigs little pigs let me in. “ ”No no no! “ Said the little pigs.” Then I’ll huff and I’ll puff and I’ll blow your house in. “ So he did, and then the two little pigs escaped to the third little pig house.

When the two little pigs arrived to the third little pig house, the evil wolf came and saw the two little pigs that had escaped from him. He peeked into the window and saw the three little pigs and slowly licked his lips and said looks like I’m having dinner tonight.” Little pigs little pigs let me in! “ Said the evil wolf. ” No no no. “ Said the three little pigs. ”Then I’ll puff and I’ll huff and I’ll blow your house in. “ Said the evil wolf.

So he did, but he kept blowing and blowing but he could not blow his house down. The evil wolf think and think so he said I’ll climbed up the roof and climb down the chimney. Just before the evil wolf came down, they put  a pot on top of the fire and took off the lid then, SPLASH! The evil wolf struct into the pot like a lightning bolt and the three little pigs close the lid and ate the evil wolf for dinner.
THE END